My Waterfall

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Waterfall Haiku

Source: davidvancura on Flickr

wet season I ask

fill my cascading fall quick

like stolen kisses

It is my first attempt at Haiku, a Japanese’s poetry form. It should depict the use of water and a simile.  I struggled to meet the 5, 7, 5 syllables [well at least I feel I came close]. I did not want to skip the first assignment because the aim of the Poetry Course is to help write different poetry forms. Thank you Ben.

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